forest whispers call
arms open wide in welcome
pines invite me in
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Written for Haiku Heights, where the prompt is "pine."
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27 comments:
Talking to the trees. I like it. The footpath looks inviting.
they invite me in as well...i love the woods and forest....
The verdant forest... just some place i would want to go! Well written :)
Haven of solitude amongst rising thoughts
Yes, yes, yes.....haiku beautifully echoed the great photo......perfect
hey that's a lovely haiku..so simple yet so special..wanna go back to my childhood when dad would take us for long drives into the forest:)
That's an invitation I would answer too!
Ravaged Pine Heart
feel included ~ inviting haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
the path is narrow
always in ascending mode
God's provocation
Patti, your excellent haikus are getting me hooked into a very bad habit, ya know?
Love these short things!
(Now, wait just a MINUTE!
I didn't mean it like T H A T !)
PEACE!!!
Lovely invitation...I can't resist its call too~
How the cool and shades beckon us to venture forth with nature. A cool write Patti!
Hank
I really like this a lot, Patti, because I often feel when I wak into a forest that there is a silent, unspoken invitation from the trees. Very nice!
so simple yet so intriguing :0 loved it :)
Pines invite me in
Great line!
So easy to be invited in. Lovely.
Very delightful and refreshing haiku Patti :) and a very beautiful invitation!
Heart turned stone
You captured the serenity of a walk in the woods perfectly.
I love this!
What a beautiful haiku. Perfect language!
It's a wonderful thing to be invited in by nature. Beautiful haiku. Appeals a great deal to the country girl in me.
Lovely 'Ku. And the photo, as well. They complement one another.
Nice one!:)
Well done - love the pun!
What a brilliant picture!,good :)
lovely!
♥
This leaves with with a lovely feeling.
And a lovely invitation it is ... :)
Forest Cathedral
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